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Date: December 29, 2004 @ 8:16 PM
http://www.minibite.com/america/fourth.htm 
 
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 SoulFinder
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Date: December 29, 2004 @ 10:29 PM
Really raw feeling to it  nice job here gravy
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Droquen
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Date: December 29, 2004 @ 10:50 PM
Maybe it was because I played this in Lo-Fi but, the sound wasn't very full. The drums and vocals were audible but, the guitar could only be heard in certain parts.
Better recording could make this song sound a lot better. it definitely has potential because I enjoy this version, it has a regga feel to it. Great job!
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Engine11RDenny
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Date: December 30, 2004 @ 1:48 AM
Nice chords for this tune.  Great   perfect for the song - good use of the ride  song Good job all around guys 
 
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thebeattitudes
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Date: December 30, 2004 @ 2:00 AM
enjoyed listening to the tune. The most important thing about music is, no matter how good you get just keep having fun making music. God Bless
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sween
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Date: January 3, 2005 @ 4:31 PM
Good tune, seems alittle inconsistent with the tempo but still cool track, you guys are good for just starting up, nice1  Keep on rockin
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 Traf
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Date: January 4, 2005 @ 12:07 PM
Voice comes over well on this..
Yeah good little song..
I second the beattitudes.. keep em coming and keep on enjoying yourselves..
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 Lastsongsang
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Date: January 4, 2005 @ 4:27 PM
You're pretty good, I liked this song alot, thanks for the comment
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clickplay
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Date: January 6, 2005 @ 1:46 AM
Your recordings are becomming more defined -good job ,keep up the good work.
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Guitargeek
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Date: January 10, 2005 @ 4:26 AM
I like this. Simple but effective.
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 SilverShining
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Date: January 19, 2005 @ 6:44 PM
You guys define the term "garage band" -- in all its rawness and reality and lack of production. This song reminds me of 70's stoner rock with its length and repetition (think: Doors and Zepplin). If that's what you're aiming it, you hit the target. The gradually-slowing tempo was also interesting. It's great to sound good, but I will also back up what others have said: it's more important that you get something out of it first. If we get something out of it, that's..well..gravy. Rock on.
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methyleneblue
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Date: January 20, 2005 @ 1:11 PM
This song has a nice moving flow to it--I like the accented bass line a lot.
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thumper30
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Date: January 24, 2005 @ 9:12 PM
this song is a piece of shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! no i dont really think that but we needed at least one crude comment
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ChaosSurfer
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Date: January 25, 2005 @ 3:16 AM
I enjoyed this. I like the raw chemistry you have. Don't lose that as you start to grow as musicians!
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 jimihendrix101
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Date: January 26, 2005 @ 6:36 PM
u kno my girl is a song right?, ok im just being a critic, i really did not dig this song dude. guitar part is simple, drum part is simple
(and pritty sloppy) and vocals kept hitting wrong pitches, unless that is the way iots supposed 2 b, in that case i don;t like the song. srry but this gits 2 thumbs down
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gravy426
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Date: January 26, 2005 @ 10:26 PM
hey jimmi i just asked if you play? i didn't mean to piss you off!
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strum
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Date: January 27, 2005 @ 2:45 PM
umm kinda bare... a lot seems to be missing, boost up that acoustic volume a bit... the drumming is not that great, but it seems more like you're not confident of your own playing... so yea just play what you can, but with your full energy/dedication and confidence SHUD flow out
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 GTLive
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Date: January 27, 2005 @ 11:39 PM
Recorded over by mistake! 
Look at everyone rippin' you apart over this track, WTF. I think it's alright. Yeah you could do this or that or the other but you chose to post the thing & that's OK.
Just jammin' away pretty cool. Lots of us do multiple takes, and fix shit after the fact instead of just playing like you are doing here. What everyone means by RAW I guess.
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Engine11RDenny
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Date: January 29, 2005 @ 1:24 AM
Thats the best sound you can have RAW I agree with Gary Live In Studio sounds best. 
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RayN44
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Date: January 29, 2005 @ 1:25 AM
You guys are getting there need to work with the productions. Its a good song but your vox do go off key at times but hey gotta start somewhere. keep it up your doin just fine guys
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Hatsy
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Date: February 11, 2005 @ 7:36 AM
I see you had a mixed bag on the comments here & most people appreciate that you have only just started out & therefore there are areas needing a polish but what I really dig about Dmusic is that most musicians see past the odd production blip to the song itself & that's what it's all about, you wrote a good strong song here & used your creativity, we all started in garages or someone's bedroom & what you don't need is a knock back, keep at it, with lots of rehearsals you could have a great little band, your vocals are on the soul/rock side in my opinion & you could really develop that, I think this is a shining example of early greats, go for it.
& don't ever give up no matter who says what, believe in yourself if this is what you want to do Even Led Zep/Stones/Paul Rogers had to start somewhere, nobody just arrived at the top without lots of work underneath but you have talent & that's a starting point. 
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stratmanstl
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Date: June 22, 2005 @ 11:57 AM
Yeah, I agree, some nice ideas and a good hook. Just work on the production and vocal pitch.
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Stercesderised
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Date: September 21, 2005 @ 2:06 PM
i like the structure of the song...i definitely feel where you're going with this. production quality aside, this is a very good track. keep up the great work!
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Darren89
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Date: April 18, 2006 @ 5:12 AM
hey, i like the originality of all your songs they are all quite nice in their own way.
i also did some original stuff myself when u asked me before so if u wanna have a look go ahead. anyway good job keep on going!
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